The clock on the wall just stopped ticking,
The wind that surrounds just stopped blowing,
The leaves in the autumn just stopped falling,
The birds moving around just stopped flying,
The rush of the traffic just stopped moving,
Every eye around just stopped blinking,
The kids crying aloud just stopped weeping,
The earth we are on just stopped rotating,
The moon around the earth just stopped oscillating,
The planets around the sun just stopped revolving.
When all this can happen with one look of yours,
I’m in true love with you my darling,
As the heart within me, just stopped beating.
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Creativision is all about the things that I pen down in my free time. I like writing poems and I hope the readers will like it as well
6 comments:
wow what an expression, truly exploring...
The realm of poetry is the highest echelon in the literary world. I am happy that one of my frns is able to reach there.
Badiya hai........... tu bhi likhne lag gaya...... Good one....... keep going dude
There are very few people who express their feelings through poetry. In my opinion, you have achieved it.
Keep up the good work and keep expressing your feelings more!!
Beautiful words and a beautiful feeling all together when I read it.Everything has come to a halt i must say.
I am no great writer, nor a reader, but this work of yours made me halt and have a look at it, good keep up the good work
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